Like Travelling on a road
knowing the 'detour' sign ahead
we kept moving.
Like a couple doing a waltz To an abruptly ended song We held onto each other.
Like a starving mortal awaiting a piece of food I craved for your love.
Like a drunken man unaware of his situation I tolerated everything from you.
Like an echo bouncing once then getting lost in the air My words came but went unheard.
Like a beaten soldier Returning from war I walked away from your doorstep.
Like ghosts occupying a house After its inhabitants leave Your presence kept me company.
Like a rose torn petal by petal Then blown by the wind My tortured wait ended in vain.
Like falling from 90 feet & still undead Your image still lingers in my head.
Like sustaining silence After the music had ended
My empty life continued.
Like a couple doing a waltz To an abruptly ended song We held onto each other.
Like a starving mortal awaiting a piece of food I craved for your love.
Like a drunken man unaware of his situation I tolerated everything from you.
Like an echo bouncing once then getting lost in the air My words came but went unheard.
Like a beaten soldier Returning from war I walked away from your doorstep.
Like ghosts occupying a house After its inhabitants leave Your presence kept me company.
Like a rose torn petal by petal Then blown by the wind My tortured wait ended in vain.
Like falling from 90 feet & still undead Your image still lingers in my head.
Like sustaining silence After the music had ended
My empty life continued.
5 comments:
The image of this was particularly striking..and strong..
"Like a beaten soldier
Returning from war
I walked away from your doorstep."
Is this reality of imagination?
Thanks ...but i dont get ur question exactly...
I myslef like the falling part..that was actaully the inspiration.
"Like sustaining silence
After the music had ended
My empty life continued"
Wonderful, Painful ....
I meant whether this poem was written due to a real experience or it was a part of your imagination.
It's all imaginative .
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